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Heartbreaking and Heartwarming

"This is a poignant short story, both heartbreaking in many ways, and heartwarming. From past wrongs needing to be righted, to broken hearts needing mending. It would have been nice to dive deeper into the backstory or the reasoning of Ben, but honestly, leaving it up to the reader to fill in the gaps from what is said and what is left unsaid works beautifully too."

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Packed more twists and turns than I had anticipated for this short read! Perfect HEA!

"Okay, loved the MC and the storyline full of mysterious twists and turns. One part even brought tears to my eyes but like in the best way possible. And don't get me started on the ending- I don't want to say too much to ruin it for others, but I will say I liked it very much and it tied it all together perfectly!"

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The perfect paranormal romance- wish it was longer

"The pacing was perfect as the curious events unfolded. The MC was relatable, and it felt as though her emotions transcended the pages. The ending was out of this world! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, however, just wish it would have been a bit longer. "

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