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Alpha's forbidden mate

"What i liked about the story is that it's action and emotional packed I recommend this story to my sister zulpher I gave that rating to this story because its entertaining and isn't predictable "

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The Alphas Forbidden Mate

"I enjoyed reading this so far but hope the story continues or there is a sequel "

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Arlene

"I loved the book"

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Alphas Forbidden Mate

"Plot is easy to follow without typos and grammatical errors. I hope she sticks it to Zachery...HARD! Five stars"

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Amazing potential!

"I love the core idea of this novel. It just reads younger, more of a YA if it didn’t have explicit scenes. That being said there isn’t to in-depth of that. The story just needs more realism on some scenes. Even for a paranormal some scenarios are unrealistic and is just fanned over. I would suggest to just change some of the intimidate scenes and make it a YA. And work more on flow and realism in time lines. "

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