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Storm's lightning bolt of a review

"I absolutely ADORE this story!! Beautifully written, love the characters, and the plot was the frosting on the cake!! I would highly recommend this story to ALL FANTASY LOVERS!! And you know it's wonderful because this is my first ever recommendation!!"

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Wow

"Loved this one. Short, sweet and beautiful. You should write more books like this. "

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Story that made me smile!

"That dream, that thought, that fear.. Might be blur but now had been clear.. Not so far from where she stood.. Neither so ubiquitous nor so rare.. For: That one who is lending her hand to slowly moving air, her eyes to that mystical one , her time to quite nothingness with everything..Niva. Having everything out of nothing in that place untouched with wings of time, harshness of sun and cruelty of world..lying wrapped in a divine, ambiguous but vivid world. Loved that bizarre but most fascinating story!💝"

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