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The orchard of Black Salt - Book 1

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Summary

Logline: Plane crash survivors wake on a dusk-shrouded isle of black salt and obsidian fruit. But their arrival wasn’t an accident. It’s the start of a terrifying harvest. Salt. Silence. Six survivors, including haunted tech founder Jonah, sharp anthropologist Emily, pragmatic banker Chuka, and traumatized Aisha, awaken on Oileán na Marbh Salann – the Isle of Dead Salt. The silence is predatory, the black sand crunches like bone, and the air is thick with dread. A mysterious Keeper warns them away from the orchard’s unnatural black fruit. Visions haunt Jonah, a strange doll shows Aisha glimpses of bloody rituals, and Emily’s science fails against the island’s impossible nature. They are watched. Creatures stir. Suspicion grows when Chuka finds a hidden case with ritual objects and a journal bearing a chilling spiral symbol. The island itself seems alive, swallowing threats whole. Then, the journal’s first entry reveals the horrifying truth: “May 4th, 2025: The survivors wake on the shore, unaware the harvest has already begun.” They were brought here. The harvest is waiting.

Status
Complete
Chapters
13
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

JONAH

Salt. The first taste was salt, sharp and crystalline on his tongue, gritty against his teeth. Then came the silence, a thick, muffling blanket heavier than any Lagos go-slow. It pressed against his eardrums, a physical weight. Jonah’s eyes fluttered open, then squeezed shut against a sky the colour of bruised plums, bleeding into an impossible twilight. Where…?

He tried to sit up. Pain, white-hot and blinding, shot through his left shoulder, radiating down his arm. He gasped, collapsing back onto sand that wasn’t soft beach sand, but coarse, dark grit that crunched under his weight like shattered obsidian. Obsidian?

“The ground remembers blood spilled carelessly, Jonah,” Mama Nkechi’s voice echoed in his skull, not a memory but a fresh wound. “This venture… it smells of hubris. The ancestors frown when a man builds his house on shifting sand.”

He’d waved her off, hadn’t he? Smiled that placating smile he reserved for investors and superstitious old women. “Mama, it’s tech, not juju. Servers, not shrines.” His own voice sounded hollow now, mocking.

He forced his eyes open again, blinking away the grit. Wreckage. Twisted metal, shards of composite material, the ghost of blue airline paint – all scattered along the dark shore like the discarded toys of a careless god. Smoke, thin and acrid, curled from a larger piece of fuselage half-submerged in the unnervingly still water. The sea itself was wrong, too dark, too calm, barely whispering against the shore.

Panic, cold and sharp, began to claw its way up his throat. The flight. Lagos to London. The pitch, the screams, the sudden, violent rending sound…

He pushed the memory down, hard. Survival first. Assess. He flexed his fingers on his right hand. Good. Rotated his right ankle. Stiff, but functional. The left arm was a disaster, hanging limp, the shoulder screaming agony. Head… pounding, but clear enough. He tasted blood, coppery and thick, alongside the salt.

He wasn’t alone. Fifty yards down the beach, a figure was stirring. Female, slight build, dark hair plastered to her skull. She pushed herself up slowly, clutching her head.

Jonah tried to call out, but only a dry croak emerged. He swallowed, the salt rasping his throat raw. He tried again. “Hello? Are you… alright?”

The sound, thin as it was, seemed unnaturally loud in the crushing silence. The woman’s head snapped towards him. Her eyes, wide and dark, fixed on him with an unnerving intensity.

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