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ALPHA'S HIDDEN LUNA

"WELL WRITN ENJOYED READING THIS,"

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Wanted to re-read

"I read this book last year in 2025 and I loved it. I read the book multiple times and I wanted to re-read it again today but when I opened the story it showed the sample and the rest of the story was gone... i don't understand what's happening but the author please fix the problem as soon as possible because I can't wait and this story has nice chemistry between the protagonists."

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Alpha's hidden Luna

"Oh my goodness this is the BEST story for 2025!! And there's another story too am obsessed!! "

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Good story

"Definitely waiting for the moment when Octavios discovers Helena is his mate! Surprised she’s kept it secret for so long. ❤️"

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Alpha's Hidden Luna

"Loved the story. The writing was great."

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Amazing

"I really like this story. The narrative is captivating, the story is different from what I've read so far, the love scenes are described so well it still makes me want to find a man like him. So a 10 to the author🤍"

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Swapped Luna

"Such a refreshing twist from other stories I've read! I like the characters, and like the fact that there's a strong female lead. Can't wait for the next chapter! "

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The Hidden Kuna

"I admire the suspense and that she is a spitfire even though she’s seems meek and shy "

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Alpha's Hidden Luna

"Like always, this was a great book with an engaging plot and lots of surprising twists and turns. I wished her father's storyline had been explored more. It felt like there wasn't a resolution with Helena and her father's relationship. I enjoyed the fact that Helena had a backbone and called Octavius out for never noticing, I mean, she was there for 10 years!"

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Alpha's hidden luna

"😎👍💯🖤💜🖤🖤"

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Really Interesting

"There was nothing to dislike about this book. I have enjoyed it so far. The twist and turns keeps you on edge "

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The Alpha’s hidden Luna

"You ended the story with another one, so my question is:are you writing the continuation of this story? And when.... You really don’t say anything about it and you have another books but nothing about these two.. hopefully is soon"

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Omg 😱

"I was so happy to see more of this. AND the possibility that he can eventually believe her. I hope somehow he finds Millie too. And Lorcan, while I know the original Luna was awful, and I feel for Lorcans family, his weak excuse, total blame on Luna that HE was seduced, made me angry. 😡. Betas know better and he was the Alphas best friend! Total betrayal. Could have told Thorne before cheating as the original Luna was a horrible person. So excited to see how this plays out. The reincarnated Luna is so good for Thorne. Love your unique story!"

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The Hidden Luna

"I missed you, Ancientt! You are a brilliant storyteller and enjoyed each of your amazing books. I intend to read all your new ones. Keep writing! 👍👍"

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Apha Hidden Luna

"The overall story was wonderful. The story pace was nice, not overly intense with dramatic scence. The part that I'm a bit dissatified is about the conflict with the main lead and her relationship with her father and "adopted" mother. It seems a bit rush and the confusion is still unclear. Like the misundertanding is not overly finish. I wish that the main lead had clear the mistand throughly with her "parents". Other than that, the story great, 9/10..thank you for the author to deliver such another amazing novel 🥰🥰❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥"

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Alphas Hidden Luna

"I'm really enjoying this story. I just wish it hadn't taken 10 years for Octavius to realize that Helena was his mate. I hope that her mother has told her everything but I'm afraid more may come out later and I definitely am not trusting her father. I'm praying that the pup will be fine and can't wait to read more of the story. I would definitely recommend to others"

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So far....

"This has held my interest. It is a very good read. I love all the twists and look forward to continuing. Thanks. I would for sure recommend this book. "

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Alphas Hidden Luna

"I love the way the author kept us on the edge a lot and I think anyone who likes romance should read this because it’s amazing "

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Hidden Luna

"I love how the author has kept the story in suspense. Along with the feelings of different emotions going through my head with reading each chapter. The characters are all well defined. The growth of the Luna from her past to present was heart warming. Very little spelling mistakes. I have enjoyed reading this book. So much so that it is now 2.50 AM. Still not ready to put it down. Well done :) "

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Good read

"The author honors both of the characters by letting them develop their story as it should They are allowed to find their own way I enjoy seeing helena find her voice and stregnth "

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