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"So... where to start. Yes, this story has some flaws in the over all writing. The author did say that English is not their first language. But it is still written fairly well and in no way would I say that it takes away from the work. The overall feel of this piece is emotional, it is almost as if I was in the author's head as they worked out their complex feelings on love through these two characters lives. It felt like this author bleed on the page bigger and darker vibrations that were at times almost unexpected, but never lacking. Parts of this felt like poetry which slowed down the pacing but at the same time seemed to belong where they did. If you are a reader interested in a study of love and pain, this is a good read. *Warning* this is not a happy ending. It hurts- but a good kind of pain."

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