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A dark room that was only filled with moonlight...two girls one sitting in the chair polishing her nails while the other was whimpering with pain all the bruises in her body gave her....Her once beautiful face was spoilt by acids her finger was cut...She had marks on every part of her body...her once-long hair was shingled.
“wh..y~“..
“You are asking me why Athesaya...It’s because of you, You had everything from your childhood, you had rich parents, You had beauty, you had skills, you had boys swooning over your beauty and everything...YOU HAD EVERYTHING YOU DESIRED ....Meanwhile I was just a sidekick, When everyone appreciated your beauty no one even saw me.......”
“so...yo..u pla..nned everything from the v..very beginning...g...~”
“yes I planned from the beginning and I will tell you a truth, A truth which only I know, You didn’t kill that old man...It was me who poisoned his drink when you were in the kitchen ......
when you were trying to get attention from your arranged husband, I told bad about you when you were trying to get in his and his family’s good books I fed them about your fake action...It was me who killed the great MEWAR family...I planned it perfectly didn’t I.”
“And one more thing athesaya, This was the main reason I had planned all these Abhivendra Chauhan Loved you
“Sam..hita we were sworn sisters but you betrayed me if I---”
*BANG*
*BANG*
"I HATE YOU ATHESAYA I ALWAYS HAVE HATED YOU"
This story is about betrayal rebirth and revenge may contain violent and sexual scene if uncomfortable leave early
Hello everyone,
I’m Bree, and I’m thrilled to share my new story with you! Your support means a great deal to me, and I appreciate your feedback on how I can improve my writing. I’m committed to making improvements, and I believe you’ll be pleased with the results.
As English isn't my first language, I appreciate your understanding regarding any grammatical errors. Thank you for being a part of this journey with me!
Sincerely,
BREE....
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karen cridland: Good character construction and fluid writing style.
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Danielle_Anderson: Garian’s folded arms and the anger he does not bother to hide from Tria caught my attention more than the rejection itself. He stands near the platform steps like a man watching a preventable disaster, and his insistence that the council has not agreed to exile suggests Delvan’s decree is not as abs...
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Danielle_Anderson: Kira's training yard and her mirror feel like two different women, and the gap between them is where this opening does its best work. The clean arc of the sword, the shock running up through her wrists, the bright singing moment when only the blade exists, all of that is undone by the practiced soft...
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