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Retake!

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Summary

There are two reasons we meet someone. Either they are the person who will change our life, or we are the person who will change theirs. Follow the adolescent tale of four teenagers as they progress through an array of emotions, revolving around their everyday struggles, and stick around to see what the future has in store for them. Will they be able to, Retake?!

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Author's Note - 1

Hello everyone,

First off, I would like to thank you all who picked up this series. Thanks a lot for showing your interest in the series. As you might have guessed already, this is a novella, not a novel, so it will be of a much shorter length than average novels or Japanese light novels in particular. You need not know anything about photography or astronomy at all to start reading this story. The MC starts much worse. I will also add illustrations aiding your understanding. This might be enough, paired with the explanations.

Well, for the first author’s note, this should be enough. I would like to once again appreciate your interest in the series and would love to hear what you think of it in the comments.

That’s all.

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Just constructive criticism in that wordiness in writing is not a friend, meaning that redundancy will lose readers. Your first two sentences repeat themselves right out of the gate. Choose one or the other, not both. The good news is your voice welcomes the reader to indulge in a new and exploratory world that will undoubtedly captivate them.

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