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Mom mysteriously disappeared.

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Summary

18-year-old Teenage Boy is about to realize that his divorced Mom is missing, he starts frantically looking for her, but couldn't find her.

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: a surprising Home Coming.

Amidst a cloudless sunny day in the serene town of Canton, South Dakota, I strolled along the sidewalk on my way back from school. My backpack danced up and down on my back, while my musical instrument case, containing my beloved trumpet, swayed gently through the air. I was on my way to my house where I live with my Mom Brooklyn.

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