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Loved wasn't part of the deal

"Loved this author's style of writing. The story was great reading. Couldn't put down my phone. Loved how his family came to accept her into their fold and how Arthur recovered so fully. Thank you for a great HEA story ending."

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Love this book

"This is well written and emotional"

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Renewed chapter

"Such a lovely story. Thanks for sharing."

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Love wasn't part of the Deal

"An awesum, captivating book. Savoring every word and hope this book will be enjoyed by those who is going to read it like I did."

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Love wasn't part of the deal

"Enjoying this story, love the characters cant wait for more."

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Love Wasn’t Part of the Deal

"I love this story. Especially when he has to get her back after telling her to leave. Worry if he will hurt her in the end like he had said or be in love and ask her to stay."

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Love wasn't part of the contract

"Great characters"

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Eloquent

"I totally love this storyline and I am absolutely hooked on the characters. The way the friends and special friends interact together is delightful. This book is turning into one of my favorites this year. It's very well written and compellingly interesting. "

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Perfect Story

"Gosh this got me hooked for days, the banter was really good, their love story was perfect 👌 looking forward for more books from this talented writer 👏 "

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I'm addicted

"This story is sooo captivating! From the moment you click the first chapter, it's like you won't be able to stop reading! It is so addictive! I love this story so much most especially how the author makes us feel like we're the one in it, I love how we get to experience the billionaire lifestyle and their sense of humor is topnotch! If you're looking for a good billionaire rom-com story to read with enough laughter, then this book is for you. I have no doubt that this book will become one of the best on inkitt someday! "

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Love your book

"It was so good I finished it in just two nights. And am happy you wrote it long ..you are a great writer "

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Love wasn't part of the deal

"Thank you author for sharing work that more commendable than words can describe. This story keeps me awake at night as got totally engrossed as the scene are unfolding in front of your đź‘€ "

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Comments on Book One

"First of all, thank you for taking the time, blood, sweat and tears to write a complete novel. Your writing style makes it easy for readers to bond with the characters, root for them through their highs and scowl through their lows. You also took the time to develop the main characters to allow the reader to get to know them better. Well done."

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Love wasn’t apart of the deal

"I’m sooo sad it’s over such a beautiful book loved it ❤️🎊🥳"

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Love wasn’t part of the deal

"Elizabeth and Arthur’s moments up to the actual wedding are special. Her reunion with his mother was even more impressive. It’s hard to admit you’re wrong but even harder to forgive when you are the wronged one."

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You can read it...thank me later

"If you are looking for a good story with lot of love and a mild obsession of male lead ...this is for you ....a whole green pookie ❤️....so if you are reading this please go for it...."

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What a story...

"I casually start reading and i finished it without looking what time was or place... Definitely a good story... excellent writing..i hope you give us more..❤️❤️"

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Love Wasn’t Part of the Deal

"This story is so cute! So far, it’s the perfect amount of drama, fun, humor and seriousness all in one. It is also well written. I would definitely like to read more from this author. My only issue is having to lie about where you come from to “fit in” or be with someone. I won’t give it away, but that’s a big part of the story line. Other then that, I’m enjoying this read and can’t wait for the updates to follow."

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His weakness

"So spicy and mindblowung"

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Love Wasn't Part of the Deal

"I look forward to your story. It has a lot of suspense and intrigues. I wish you could update 5 times a day."

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