Shore Part 1: Taking Command by nsharbaugh at Inkitt
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Shore - Part 1: Taking Command

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Summary

Lieutenant Michael Shore never thought he would rise to command his own vessel so quickly; nor could he ever have imagined that the fate of the British Empire would come to rest in his hands. Shore - Part I: Taking Command is the first of a trilogy of mystery/adventure novels set during the Seven Years War/French & Indian War of the 18th Century. The main character is a British Royal Navy officer who was born in the American colonies and never saw himself as upwardly mobile due to his colonial upbringing and his unfamiliarity with the mother country. Strangely, he is rapidly promoted to his own command by one of the Lords of the Admiralty and entrusted with a strange mission which is shrouded in secrecy. With the aid of his hand-picked crew of officers and men aboard HMS Philadelphia, Shore gradually comes to understand the importance of the task set before him. The strange disappearance of a British government official in Nassau leads to a voyage filled with intrigue, investigation and danger all around the Caribbean. This culminates in a race to prevent a terrible conspiracy which undermines the hold of the Crown on its colonial possessions and threatens to fatally turn the tides of war against the British Empire. A host of secondary themes abound in this work: class disparities and prejudices, leadership, teamwork, and trust to name but a few.

Status
Complete
Chapters
27
Rating
5.0 8 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Introduction

1757

Hostilities between Great Britain and France have raged in colonial America for three years - a struggle which would become known in that part of the world as the French and Indian War. It is but one theater of a much larger conflict in which both nations are fighting across the globe. This includes Europe itself, where allies of both sides are also fighting one another to maintain their own interests. Spain has thus far remained a neutral spectator in every way. The Seven Years War, as it will come to be known, will be recognized as one of the first true world wars in human history.

At this period of time, warfare is still in many respects a gentlemanly pursuit. Any man who has distinguished himself to the point of becoming a commissioned military officer, regardless of family background, is generally recognized as a gentleman. Such men would be expected to uphold certain tenets of proper behavior and always act with honor. The honor of a gentleman is worth more than gold itself...

An officer in the British Royal Navy, a young man born in the North American colonies, is about to learn of the part he will play, for better or worse, in the escalating confrontation...

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Ooh... And I have just finished the Hornblower series! This looks promising!

7 years
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Hi Bumbling Bee,

I just finished reading your story “The Monster of Beaulieu”, and I absolutely loved it. Your storytelling is atmospheric and gripping it immediately brought to mind how visually compelling it would be as a comic.

One striking scene that stood out was the eerie moment when William Saville, a restless barrister, arrives in Beaulieu in England, in 1787, where rumors speak of a monster sighted near the village and a body recently found in the river. The fog-filled streets, fearful villagers murmuring about the creature, and William’s growing curiosity all create vivid, cinematic potential. I can see comic panels rich with swirling mist, haunted eyes peering around corners, and the stark contrast between William’s civilized demeanor and the village’s dark folklore.That blend of gothic suspense, historical setting, and growing dread makes The Monster of Beaulieu feel tailor‑made for a visually immersive adaptation in comic or manga form.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to bring your world to life visually no pressure, though. I simply believe your narrative would resonate beautifully in illustrated form.

You can check out some of my recent artwork on my DeviantArt (Username – Ev3Verse). If you're interested, please message me on Discord (Username – Eve_verse) so we can explore creating this atmospheric mystery together. I’ll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards,
Evee

a year

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