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Twins

"I love stories with twins and with this one, the author nailed. I enjoyed reading it"

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Lovely love-story

"Such a lovely story, which contains everything, that a good love_toching story should have, including a decent part of sex, a lot of emotions, an italian family and and end that is even happier tjan could having been expected. Bravo! "

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Book

"Easy reading like it so far"

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Magnificent

"There is no words to describe how good I think this story is. I'm just praying. Pleease Lord let it be a sequel"

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For the Love of Julie

"Julie is a fun fast read. It is an emotional roller coaster ride, that makes you smile and cry. I hope to be able to see more from this writer."

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Too Good

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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For the Love of Julie

"Very intriguing short read! It made me want to get to know the characters better. It felt like it could happen in real life and that made the book all the more interesting. I can't wait to read more!! "

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Well done

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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Enjoyable But Confusing

"I quite enjoyed reading this story. However, I think it will greatly benefit from proper event sequencing. I understand that it's a short read...but the plot was so rushed, at some point it made my head spin. Scene breaks will be great as well, as sometimes it can be hard to distinguish if a certain scene is still a part of another. For what it's worth, this book is still a good read despite errors that needed to be fixed. Unoriginal plot, but a good read nonetheless. I know it has the potential to be much better once edited. Great effort! "

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For the love of Julie

"Overall this was a good read. It had the potential to be even better if there was more depth to the plot and characters."

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Strong story, but...

"I loved the overall story, but it was difficult to read. There were so many times names got mixed up. Mike, Julie, Janie, and Sam... there were several times that they were switched, it made it hard to concentrate on the actual story line. Plus, for an erotica book, there wasn't a whole lot of eroticism."

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