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What is your opinion?
Possessed
"Oooh wow it’s very interesting to learn about this. And yes I have been remembering my past and this has helped me "
Every yes
"Great writing, deep and elegant, honest and striking, I hope it gets seen more, good job."
too long, too boring, presentation was terrible
"back and forth between characters not impressed with too many words, repetition very boring not erotic, did not encourage me to read further ... just another female delivering a boring story . women cannot write erotica, they lack the skills that men have men understand beauty and desire and know how to express their lasciviousness ... very sexy and wanting more women live in lala fantasy land of clean speech and boring extended writing ... they do not know how to entice"
