Can’t wait to have a final copy ❤️

"I’ve been genuinely captivated by every twist in this book so far; it’s been an exhilarating rollercoaster of surprises. Yet, at times, I couldn’t help but feel the story moved a little too swiftly, almost rushing past certain moments. The last few chapters, in particular, had two scenes—the little spying boy and that forest scene—that felt like they were just inserted into the story rather than woven seamlessly into it. The timeline near the end felt cramped and hurried, leaving me craving more clarity and depth. I really wish I could have experienced Dominic’s point of view earlier in the story; I believe it would have added so much richness and emotional weight to the unfaltering love at the end. ❤️❤️❤️ there was some odd spelling errors but wasn’t sure if you wanted them marked 🙈 it’s only the first draft and I loved reading it 🥰"