I am curious for sure

"As someone who watched Kill me heal me 3 times . I am curious where are you taking us. The story progress is already different, so naturally so is the plot. The friend, the first meeting. Nicely done. Your writing style shares a bit of similarity to mine so maybe I am a tiny some bais. Descriptive storytelling. The use of Irony, sarcasm. Elliot is very vivid as a main character, his struggles are used very effectively. Your writing looks spontaneous and clean, it has an OG classic feel. I like it actually. neat, straightforward, and simple.Characters and world building are still in the early stage, but your defiantly doing a good job. It has potential. The only issue I have is how short these chapters were, but maybe it's just me. Wishing you success. Fighting! "