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Ohh my god

"Oh my God oh my God very beautiful "

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Our vows were lies

"It's a beautiful short story that elicits deep emotion about heartbreak. The story was not too graphic in terms of scenes or dialogues of emotional or physical abuse but told in simple reflections that is more heartwrenching. I am truly touched and very appreciative that you shared this story, author❤️❤️❤️"

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Unrequited love

"Having to learn to choose yourself because the one you love does not see you is so sad. To finally see what you lost but can never get back is also so sad. This is a silent tragedy that long after you finished reading still crushes the heart. Written as a warning… never overlook people. They maybe what your soul needs. "

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Full with emotion

"It never too late find yourself again, I love the story but it would need rearranging the plot to avoid confusion"

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Our Vows Were Lies

"True love no one can describe shatter into heartbreak with raw emotions! And the realation you can choose youself and step out a better you! And in the end true love and healing! So worth the read! Do not skip it!"

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