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Terra Promissa: La Ciudad Perdida

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Summary

Un campesino de un pueblo antiguo se embarca en un viaje hacia la Gran ciudad a la que llaman "La Tierra Prometida" en el camino enfrentará varios desafíos, cada uno le enseñará una gran lección.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
4.5 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

Arco I: Primer Paso.

“No hace falta tener todas las respuestas para comenzar, aunque sí es imprescindible estar dispuesto.”

Eso leía en su manuscrito, recostado sobre un árbol, observando su pueblo desde una pequeña colina. El viento acariciaba su piel, y desde allí, los habitantes se veían como hormigas que se movían sin cesar. Algo dentro de él se removía al contemplar la escena, y las palabras que leía perforaban su mente.

“No se trata de llegar, sino de mirar de lejos el lugar en donde comenzaste.”

“Tal vez este libro tenga razón”,. “Tendría que caminar muy lejos para poder comprenderlo”. Pero, en ese momento, lo único que podía hacer era seguir caminando, aunque no supiera hacia dónde lo llevaría.

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