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Capture by Bear Shifter

"I really enjoyed this story it short and sweet, not a whole lot of chapters to get to the point! Loving it 😍"

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Virgie's Take

"For 15 chapters, Kael didn't know why he was attracted to the human woman. It was romantic that they were each other's first sexual experience. Toko, was a good supportive character."

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Trapped by the bear shifter

"Good story, solid plot and characters that are intriguing and very human-like (as much as a bear can be). No real threat, just a human trapped in a world unlike her own and the dangers of the unknown but it was a nice change of pace. Did find that a couple of parts were repeated and we had a chapter or 2 with a first person view before switching back to third person like the rest of the story, however, I can say that it didn't ruin the pacing. It just stands out and can cause a small confusion. Also the time jumps by the end, while understandable, they felt a bit out of place and didn't fully feel fulfilling, plus they came out more rushed than anything else at least to me. Still would recommend this story."

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Trapped by the bear shifter

"This story was wonderful! I enjoy it very much, it was captivating, right from the beginning. Kael's character was awesome and Ava turn out to be perfect for him. We need another book of the life of the Bear shifter. "

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🐻 Bears

"This was a cute story. Thank you. Would love to see a baby brother and where that leads... 😀"

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Trapped by the bear shifter

"What a beautiful story!!!🥰😊"

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Thank you

"A few words were not spell checked or edited correctly but an interesting and lovely story. The way in which you drew me into the story made that once started I couldn't stop until I got to the end of the book 💜 "

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Trapped by the bear shifter

"Great story, well written "

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Trapped by the bear shifter

"Wonderful story! I love Kael and Ava’s journey even though she made it really difficult at times. I love Kael’s character. Even though it’s a short story it’s a complete story. Fantastic job author. 💞🩷💞"

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Enjoyable story

"Another good story from this author. There are a few paragraph duplications to clean up but otherwise a well written visual gem. Just the right amount of chapters to finish in one sitting. Highly recommend for an easy read. "

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Trapped by the bear shifter

"Enjoyed this quick read ALOT! Too bad its over, loved the characters and your writing style!"

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Pochoclera

"Es como las películas pochocleras. Una historia que va directo al punto. Me hubiese gustado, tal vez, un poco más de desarrollo de personajes, pero está buena. No lo doy cinco estrellas por eso y porque en un par de capítulos se repiten párrafos."

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TRAPPED BY THE BEAR SHIFTER

"Cute story. Enjoyed the light reading. Definitely an HEA ending. 💚💚👽"

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Cute

"This is a very cute shifter story. Very heart warming and some funny moments. If you love romance then thusnis a great book to read."

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Worth reading but flawed

"Very sweet short story. I enjoyed the plot, but there were a few inconsistencies and some holes. Lots of grammar problems, but nothing that can't be fixed with a good proofread. Nothing that kept me from processing the story as it was meant; mainly just a lack of punctuation and not the kind used for emphasis. Overall, this was a great intro to the author's writing style and I definitely liked the way the story flowed. I look forward to reading more from them soon. :)"

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Eva

"He's a real bear. Rude. Selfish. The story was too fast-paced, so I couldn't grasp the emotions. They're distant from people, but they understand each other's language. The man is dominant, completely instinctive. The woman is submissive, acting solely on her emotions. A true mountain dweller. Their first encounter felt like rape. It's not a story to be read with a modern mindset. There's zero logic. But it's readable as a light snack."

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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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