Nice plot, good execution, natural dialogue.

"Overall, your story remind me of everything that I had experienced, feels like I'm reading my own monologue on a diary. Nostalgia is all I can say, some scenes made me emotional, your words twisted my heart into pieces at some point. I really enjoyed reading this! As someone who is not into pure romance, I would say 100/10. The plot is good and the tone of protagonist is natural and realistic. There were just a bit of fix in punctuation and I was looking more depth of the protagonist's life which made me feel like there's something missing."