CHAPTER ONE: THE GIRL IN THE SNOW
They found her in the wreckage of the longhouse, knee-deep in blood and soot, her small hands raw from the cold, wrapped tight around the haft of a knife too big for her. She was nine winters old.
The snow was still falling—soft, silent, indifferent. But nothing touched her. The flurries veered as if repelled by the heat of something darker than fire.
The warriors who came upon the ruins were hardened men, killers with faces like carved stone. But even they hesitated.
A child should’ve been weeping. A child should’ve been dead.
She knelt beside a woman’s corpse, her mother perhaps—burned black, one arm stretched toward the girl as if to shield her even in death. The girl’s head was bowed, not in mourning, but in stillness so complete it was unnatural.
Then she looked up.
Her eyes were wrong.
Red—not brown, not blue, not human. The red you see in firelit nightmares or blood pooling under moonlight. One of the men took a step back. Another muttered a prayer.
Behind her, the inside of the longhouse was a slaughterhouse. Bodies skewered on broken beams. Blood on the rafters. Something—something had been flayed and nailed to the door with bones for nails.
The air reeked of iron and something older.
Worse.
“By the gods,” one of the men whispered. “Who did this?”
The girl stood slowly, knife still in hand. The blade was chipped, caked with gore, and notched from use. Not a child’s weapon. Not a child’s eyes.
She looked at each man in turn.
Then she smiled.
One of the men tried to speak. Tried to call her girl, or child, or something soft.
But before he could, another choked out a name. His dying breath, throat split from earlier wounds, gurgled it past his lips like a curse.
“Mercy.”
The girl smiled and looked deep into the Viking’s eyes. It was clear this girl was no mere child. She was a haunting thing.
They took her to the village, though no one wanted to ride with her. She said nothing. Ate a little. Slept less. When she did sleep, she screamed in a tongue no one recognized. The seer heard it and fled the next day. Left her runes behind, broken.
Some said she was cursed. Others said she was the only survivor of a massacre.
But the old ones remembered a name. A word that meant nothing and everything. A warning carved into the roots of Yggdrasil itself.
Mercy.
They tried to call her Mersja, softening the edges. Pretending she was only a girl. But that name never fit. It slid off her like water off stone.
By the time she was twelve, she’d broken three boys’ arms in training. By thirteen, she could outfight most of the grown men. She did not speak often, but when she did, it was to ask for steel.
At fifteen, she disappeared.
They say she walked into the forest on the coldest night of the year, wearing nothing but a cloak of wolfskin and the same black knife she’d been found with.
Three days later, she returned with blood on her face and a sack of heads.
One of them was the raider who had once claimed to have burned her village.
None dared ask about the others.
She laid the sack at the jarl’s feet and said, “I am done waiting.”
He asked her name.
She looked him in the eye and said, “Mercy.”
Then she smiled again.
The name caught like fire.
Mercy the Mercyless.
The Vikingess of the Shadows.
The child of fire and slaughter.
The Goddess of no power.
Birthed not from a woman, but from the very depths of Hell itself. No one knows if she is truly human. She is not a beast. She is not a god. She is something else.
And the gods-those high and mighty things—they watched her grow in silence.
They looked down upon their creation and prayed the world was ready for her.









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