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BEST WONDERFUL WRITER IV EVER SEEN

"She makes me feel like I’m there!!! I dream about the characters!! She keeps me hot and HORNEY!!! I have never seen stories like this!!! I need this heat after 35 years of a dry marriage I feel like I’m 16 again!!! If you want to be aroused and need to feel alive again this writer is for you!!!"

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Good book

"I really enjoyed this plot. Theres only one thing i am confused about, the 7/8mark. At one point it sounded like it was how many times she sold her memories, then how many times she was in love, then how many times she turned her back on love for herself, then that she was the 7th/8th of her name? What exactly was the point of the marks?"

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One of my favorites!

"Dark love with intensity and thorough devotion. Ash spoke to me (Cancer-born here). One of my favorites to read again and again!"

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The masterpiece that I knew it would be.

"I know this author's work well, and she has only improved over time (though it was always wonderful). But this brought things to another level. It's pure, dark, intense poetry. This is not reading for the faint of heart. But if you want to read something original in ways that should be applauded and are tired of all the trite copycats and overdone tropes, then this is the book for you."

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Perfection😍🔥👌🥵💯😍😈

"Finally a dark romance with characters that feel real, messy, and broken and worth rooting for. They're not edgy or abusive for shock. Liora and Ash their chemistry is insane. The smut is so hot. It , means something. Super graphic and beautifully written. The story had way more depth than I expected. I couldn't put it down. More like this please! "

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A Vow In Venom

"Enjoyed the story, thank you 😎👍🖤🖤💜🖤"

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A Vow In Venom

"Love, love, love this story!!"

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Wow

"Incredible. The spice is masterful. But the banter and violemt, constant shifting dynamic between ash and liora is the authors biggest strength. Beautifully written Cant believe this is free to read."

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A TRUE and perfect dark romantasy.

"From the first chapter this story ate and left no crumbs, as the kids say. Liora is a unique FMC, not young, naive OR sweet (none of this book is "sweet", funnily enough, except for her shadows that seem to love touching/holding Ashton, so damn cute), but is unapologetically embracing of her succubi nature. She's clearly not thrilled that-- against her better judgement-- she forms an attachment/obsession with Ashton who is an over-calculating scheming vampire, but just unhinged enough to meet her level of intensity. Unapologetically brutal and honest, this story at its core is about two people who are attracted to each other but fighting their instincts every step of the way. The smut is thorough, well written and FITTING, not gratuitous or out of context. The author is a gifted wordsmith and unravels the story with gorgeous analogies and metaphor– and frankly makes me feel stunted as a writer by comparison. Solid banter, chemistry, and love-hate intensity as every good dark romance should be. I can't wait for the next chapters and I SWEAR these stubborn people better finally admit their feelings for each other before the story ends or I will be heart broken. lol 5/5 Would recommend. "

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Fabulous

"Fabulous story all around. Characters? 10/10 Story? 10/10. Writing!? 100/100"

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Unique and hotter than Hades

"Gothic horny chaos. Fuck or die 🥵 the writing is so pretty but doesn't hide from the darkness This is a masterpiece. Ruined me for all other dark romance books. Tired of weak, abused Fmcs? Read this. "

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