What is your opinion?
Love it
"A very good story and interesting characters, making it really fun to read. I love all the plot twists and the way the setting is described; it feels like I'm in a movie. Amazing!"
Alien romance Is addictive
"The tension between Kaia and Rael crackles with slow-burn intensity, turning a classic "crash lands on alien planet" premise into something fresh and compelling. Rael’s fierce, protective instinct over his newfound mate is both heart-fluttering and fiercely hot, especially when he defends her against his own kind. The worldbuilding is vivid, and the purring detail? Chef’s kiss. A fast-paced, satisfying read that hooks you instantly."
Definitely recommend
"While there were a few errors in the book they weren’t impossible to navigate. Overall the book was very good. It hooked me in the first chapter. Even though it was a little fast paced it was very engaging. I thought at first the Prime was going to be a real douche, but he proved to be the opposite. Just because there were a few errors don’t let it get you down. I’ve read books by well known authors that have had errors in theirs as well. Please keep writing. I’m looking forward to reading the second book especially when it’s completed. Thank you for sharing your work with us. "
Great story!
"I love the plot! The characters aren't so over described that you have to check your mental picture constantly. My only suggestion would be to run this through an editing software. It's missing a lot of punctuation, like quotation marks and periods. "
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"Hay historias que se leen... y hay historias que se sienten como una herida abierta. Esta obra no busca agradar, busca despertar. Cada palabra parece escrita desde un lugar donde el dolor no se disfraza, donde la verdad no pide permiso. No es una lectura ligera, es un descenso. Un viaje hacia lo más crudo del pensamiento humano, donde el amor, la muerte y el vacío no son conceptos, sino presencias que respiran entre líneas. El autor no escribe para entretener, escribe para confrontar. Y en ese enfrentamiento, el lector se encuentra a sí mismo: roto, vulnerable, pero extrañamente vivo. La narrativa tiene una intensidad que quema lento. No necesitas acción constante, porque cada frase pesa, cada silencio grita. Es poesía disfrazada de historia... o tal vez una historia que se desangra en poesía. No es para todos. Y precisamente por eso, es especial. Si alguna vez sentiste que el mundo se te caía dentro del pecho... este libro ya te estaba esperando."
The Zatorian
"A human female has crash landed onto a planet that has lost all of their unmated females to a sickness. The Commander and his two men find her in the wild and the Commander recognizes her as his fated mate. The kind you wish for... Things heat up faster than a spacecraft hurdling through the atmosphere. Great characters. Nicely written, entertaining sci-fi erotica. *** I'm off to read book 2. "
The Zotarian
"I enjoy 😉 this book very much. The characters are greatly the way you describe the scenes is easy to project in my mind. Their story is 🔥 and very interesting 🤔 Look forward to your second book! Thanks for this story!"
The Tavorian
"If you enjoy a sci-fi tale with a warm inter species romance, this is one you need to read. I’m looking forward to the next tale."
The writing is amazing!
"I love the plot and writing style and flow of the story. Details and timeline flow well. Occasionally missed grammar but the writing flowed so smoothly. I think this is a new favorite! "
Beautiful story
"Loved the story, waiting for reading the book 2"
Wonderful
"I can’t put it down once I start reading it❤️"
A nice twist on a crash landing
"I enjoyed this story and I’m looking forward to book two! My favorite character is Eve! I just love her snark! The humor is written very well and the characters interact nicely with each other!"
THE ZATORIAN
"Enjoyed the repertoire between the Captain and her ship's computer! Such a love story of Kaia and Rael (the Prime's General). The tech level of Rael's world is interesting. I hope Book 2 follows soon. 💚💚💚👽"
pls get a better cover
"story feels okay but the guy in the picture is just meh. putting me off finishing it"
Continuity
"The continuity errors make it hard to enjoy. I really want to like it, but the "rules" of what is explained in the book changes every other paragraph. It makes the plot so impossibly hard to reach that it takes away the enjoyment. Even if I were to try to ignore a small error here or there, there's so much that it just can't happen. I think it would be such a great book if you could figure out how to get the plot achieved without having the book collapse in on itself."
