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Loved it

"I'd totally recommend this to a friend. It's got all tht I'd love to see in a book. Love the writing style too "

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"Fine, worth reading would recommend to people who read these types of books"

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Good

"Good so far"

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Good story, needs more body

"The relationships between the characters evolve way faster than they should in the writing as it now. I feel like this a lot of potential but it needs to be brought to the surface. You can dig deeper in the characters, what happens. Describe her feelings better. I feel like it needs more surrounding, more padding. Although the story on itself is very original, unique. "

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