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Excellent Story!

"I found this story via Facebook, and I'm so glad that I did! This was a fun story about a woman finding her own strength with a man that supports her instead of overwhelming her. Seeing Lynley's journey from a housewife and mother who had lost herself because of her cheating husband to a strong, vibrant, multi-faceted woman who stood up for herself and her children was heartwarming. She didn't need Grafton's help, but he was more than willing to be a shoulder to lean on when she wanted one. Overall, the story was well paced and kept me engaged. There were some areas where grammar and some editing would help, but it wasn't enough to put me off of the story. I was checking the app pretty regularly for updates. While I understand the reason behind the regularly inserted copyright notices, they were the only thing that really put me off. The way they are inserted mid-sentence with no punctuation around them interrupted the flow and that was frustrating as a reader. "

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Karmic

"Great storyline and characters, just enough suspense."

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Love it 😁

"I am absolutely loving this story, can't wait for more."

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Broken vows

"So far loving it"

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Love the plot

"Love the plot and how the woman found out stood up for herself and took charge of her life instead of listening ing to the man and just letting him say “I’m sorry.” And taking him back, but she’s doing the right thing and taking her and her kids out of that so her kids don’t grow up thinking what their dad is was okay."

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Great book

"This story is great.. I just love everything about it. I seriously can't put it down! Very well written I can't wait to the end!! "

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Love this author

"This is a very well written book! I have read other books by the author and I live here writing style. "

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Great read

"Really enjoying this story so far. Not long and drawn out."

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Love it

"I absolutely love this story and excited about more updates. Christopher is infuriating and unredeemable. He deserves everything that comes his way. Ohhh now Grafton is Mr Smexy and Lynley is one lucky woman to get his attention and devotion. Thank you for this story looking forward to more of it. "

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Loving this story!

"Really great writing! I am thoroughly enjoying this one and can't wait to watch that filthy toolbag of a husband get his comeuppance!"

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HOOKED!

"This story has me hooked right away and it's only getting better!"

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