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Pucks and Promises
"😊What a sweet story"
Pucks and promises
"While the plot was ok, you made so many errors. 1 I remember was Marcus was injured but then you changed that to Thor. You also wrote about Harper skating with Nathan but then later she does it for the first time. You also made a huge error where Harper was was on the benches with note pad in hand but then she's playing in the skirmish. I'm sure there's more but these stood out the most. Sorry author but I have to be honest. "
