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Midnight canary

"I enjoyed the story very much"

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Beautiful Descriptive Writing

"I enjoyed this story. The author is skilled in creating beautiful scenery for the imagination. "

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A unique and genius story!!

"This book was a unique storyline. The author did a fantastic job of pulling me in and keeping me mesmerized with the story she told. Absolutely perfect setting for a book 2 allowing us to see the toddler become a woman with her powers. "

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Midnight Canary

"Normally, the goal Erica has in this story bothers me in other stories because it's used as a tool. But in Erica's case, it was fueled by a deep personal desire that should have been fulfilled in her position. However, based on the events that occured it didn't happen. After meeting Zahir, her life changed. What follows is a world we are pulled into as if witnessing it from the view of the audience. This was an incredible read! Thank you for sharing."

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Midnight Canary

"Canary is the word Zahir, a genie, uses to describe Erica. The midnight Canary, “soft, seductive, unforgettable.” The Midnight Canary is the stage name for the masked erotic public performances Erica chose as her bargain for her life's desired wish to be fulfilled. On stage in Zahir’s world, a thousand unexplored, explosive erotic doors potentially beckon. Is Erica ready to burst her caging life restrictions and fly? A cute epilogue. An engaging, sensual and magical read. "

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Pure magic

"Captivating story that binds you to it 'til completion. Great characters, story sprinkled with spice and warmth. "

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Mesmerizing

"Great character growth, sexual tension, love story."

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Midnight Canary

"So magical!!! I thought it’s just another romance but lo and behold, it’s magic! Read it in one sitting! Inspiring and it took me to another place that is out of this world! Great job! Thank tou for sharing!!!! ❤️❤️❤️"

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Magical

"This short story is magical! Mind-blowing with poetic writing, almost graphic: sometimes you don't know if you are reading or admiring paintings. I really loved it, even if the feelings between the different characters could have sometimes been more explored. I highly recommend it! "

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