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Enjoyable

"This novel has a good hook to it, interesting characters and premise. I’m enjoying it a lot. My only feedback is perhaps to have a closer proofread before posting. I often come across missing words or grammatical errors; I am by no means an expert but that just highlights the need further. Many chapters back, an entire paragraph was repeated, and recently a paragraph was quite jarring to read due to its construction; the way the author chose to break up the text and description didn’t flow very well but was easily fixed by switching some things around. All things said, I’m reading this for free, enjoying it very much and definitely appreciate the hard work and passion put into this piece. I encourage the author to continue their work with pride and continue to build upon their skill and passion for writing."

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Very well done!

"The story flows nicely, and the writing seems effortless, normal. It is not a great work of art, none of the books I read here are, but it is entertainment, and it is decently done so far. I believe it's this nicely composed because the author takes her time, because it is a process that brings her enjoyment. So, please, do continue in the same fashion; never start rushing it. I don't mind the wait if the result is this smooth."

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Ice Bear's Bride

"Loving the building of suspense and characters, love that they aren't the perfect person, there's flaws and backstories...excellent writing style, can't wait to read the rest."

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Lovely Story With A Hint of Suspense

"So far, the story has been great. It's a slow burn between the two main characters. There's the hint of suspense. It keeps you wanting more."

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Very good so far

"I’m enjoying the story line and writing style. The English and grammar are correct and the writing flows very well. The characters are interesting and well developed in a natural manner. "

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Yess!

"Yes a update! Can't wait for more, story is amazing "

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Shifter romance that draws you in

"Loved the start. Can’t wait to see - will she follow him 😍"

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I need more!!

"Absolutely loving the is story and the characters - please hurry up and write some more 🙏🙏🙏🙏"

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Unique World with Strong Characters

"What I like most about this story so far is the dedication to character development, world building, and pacing. It isn't too fast, it isn't too slow. Side characters are also strong. They aren't just an appendage to the mains or cannon fodder for the plot. They are unique and human, even if they only show for a scene or two. I have to say that Nord's backstory and intrigue capture me the most. I mean, come on~ A polar bear shifter with a pack that works in the mountains as a rescue team against the elements?! That is such a splendid and refreshing idea! I'm glad the author also took the time to build upon it and not just mention it as a pretty prop. They put time and thought into it. There is a whole universe in this story! I highly recommend, and I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds!"

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Recommend

"I thoroughly recommend this story so far. I've read several shifter novels before and this one has shown a couple of unique concepts, as it does not seem to follow the typical fated mate trope many shifter stories exhibit and brings in a wider range of shifter speices. Looking forward to reading more and seeing where this story leads. "

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Not enough women to support the Shifters

"A matching service for human females to male shifters. Not as bad as it sounds. Women who want to rise above their lot and hope for better, a mate, stability, kindness. Wolves, Lion, tigers, bear, and the not so glamorous Weasel, I can't remember them all. Like the author, good vibes, can't wait for more."

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Intrigue isn't limited to humans

"Good start to the story. I find myself interested in how this will play out. Plotline is solid. It uses a historical device, mail order brides, from a time post war in the US. A lack of men available for marriages caused women to journey to the open West. Nice to see other shifters listed here, opens up the possibilities. "

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Excellent World Building

"I really love the depth and nuance you've added to each character as well as the cultures! So far, the world building is solid and very engaging! It pulls you into the story instantly and keeps you hooked! I dearly love Nord! He's my fave as of right now! Keep it going! I cannot wait for more! This story is brilliant!"

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