What is your opinion?
Whimsigoth 90s Nostalgia
"The characters are genuine, flawed and real. Connor's financial and career struggles can be felt deeply, as can Jupiter's family drama and friend struggles. The two characters work beautifully together in this slow burn romance. I haven't reached any spice yet, but given all the build-up, I'm sure it's gonna be a full course meal! I cannot wait for more and if you like 90s nostalgia, whimsigoth, the actor lifestyle, LA glamor and awkward friends to lovers, then this story is shaping up to be a solid pick! I saw a few errors and paragraphs could be strengthened in a few places, but the writing style overall is solid and well paced. Definitely strong on beautiful descriptions (which aren't overused). It's a delightful balance and really strengthens the immersion. "
90's vibe
"I'm thoroughly enjoying this story so far. It carries a wonderfully nostalgic, hazy '90s atmosphere that feels like I'm flipping through an old photo album of my youth. The characters are deeply engaging, each with their own compelling arc that draws me in equally. Very intrigued to see how the rest of this story unfolds. "
Great opening chapter
"So far, it's a great opening chapter! Connor burning his first headshot really hits in the gut how at rock bottom he feels. It's almost cathartic. Looking forward to reading more ❤️"
