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J’ai adorer l’histoire , et les rebondissements tous au long du roman

"J’ai adorer le déroulement de l’histoire du debut a la fin avec plein de rebondissements "

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Such a great book!

"Different take on mafia books. Fresh storyline. Hate,love, spicy, romantic, tension, breath holding, screaming, crying, twist, turns and just amazing writing ❤️ read it, you won't be disappointed. "

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Très captivant

"Tout est comil se doit.Une histoire émouvante qui nous retient passionnément "

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J'ai adorée

"J'ai aimé ce livre. J'ai appréciée le fait que le don soit fermé mais juste. "

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Fab! Fab! Fab!!!

"Totally enjoyed reading this book & will definitely be looking out for the sequel. Well written & soooo funny, the chemistry between the main characters was off the charts"

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The Don"s rose

"Loved this story good plot and I can not wait for the next book. Keep up the good work."

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Absolutely amazing

"Very much recommended to anyone you first go reviews like I do before reading a book. Every page worth reading. Can't wait for book 2!!! Well done on a masterpiece "

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Amazing Mafia book!

"This book was absolutely wonderful. I am usually not a big Mafia fan but this one was a mix of funny, emotional, suspense, drama, and more. Just so satisfying too. Nothing better than the deep love that has remained in this book. Thank you for this! Highly recommend!"

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Great Mafia Live story

"Just finished this and it was great from start to finish. Couldn’t put it down. Dante’s and Mia’s love for one another made the story so special. Can’t wait to read more from Helena. "

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The Don’s Rose

"I like the plot & it it keeps me guessing as to what happens next. "

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By far the BEST story!!

"I’ve read 73 books via Inkitt in 2025 & 4 this year, just finishing The Don’s Rose. And I have to say, this is the BEST story I’ve read thus far! I’m so happy to run into this one. Thank you for your writing talent! Can’t wait for more. "

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Fantastic & Enjoyable Read

"Well Done Helena 😊 I completely felling in love with this book Mikki stole my heart from the very beginning This book at everything and more. The writing was perfect and I could not find a single fault with this Very much anyone’s next read But I will keep Zippy on what happens 😉🤣 Loved it well done "

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Best story on Inkitt

"This was an amazing story. I read it way too fast, but couldnt stop once i was started. The plot and the writing is some of the best I have seen on this app! It is the kind of book you never want to end!"

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Great story

"Loved this story so much. Good writing, suspenseful, funny and spicy "

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Enjoy

"I really enjoyed this book it had ups and downs and also left you in suspense. I followed you from your other site as I was reading this and you have not disappointed me. I like your other work as well keep it up and can't wait for the next installments "

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Riveting, captivating and beautiful

"This was an amazing read. Every time I got the chance to read, I'd devour multiple chapters at once, unable to tear my eyes away. The characters are complex, realistic and complete including the characters surrounding the MC and LI. They all complement each other and the storyline perfectly. The plot was engaging and riveting.The action scenes near the end felt like a movie. The romance was beautiful and endearing to experience in this story and the added romance of side characters is an awesome bonus. The writing is strong, and evokes many emotions in the reader from endearment to excitement to laughter. This is one of the best Mafia stories I've read and I've read a lot of them. This one will linger in my memory. Looking forward to the possibility of a part two or a new story involving some of the characters. "

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Couldn't put it down!

"I absolutely loved this book and wish I had a hard copy. The characters and the story were great! I can't wait for the spin off! This author is now one of my favorites! "

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Roslyn

"I Loved everything about this Book. Thankyou Helena such a Beautiful writer. I can't wait to read more of your Books in the near Future. Sending you many Success in Life and in Business "

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great story!

"Fantastic story with surprising twists. -not just another mafia story. "

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Hhaddo

"Loved this story, loved all the feels❤️ sequel please! I think Mik needs to meet his match. A fiery red headed Irish mafia princess??? "

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