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Review
"I'm not very good at reviews, but even though I don't usually like romances I really did enjoy this story. The characters are intriguing as their views on the world are rather unique and the bullying is something most people can relate to. This story is one I would definitely recommend. I hope you continue writing and I wish you good luck on finishing this and getting in published."
Smile old heart
"Overall it was a captivating story. The bullying at school was well crafted. Allen was shown as a hard core bully who changed his ways falling in love with Maydee. Despite some typos and grammatical errors I liked the flow of the story."
Beautiful Life Views
"Wow. I really enjoyed reading this, even though I found the first chapter confusing. I especially enjoyed the eighth chapter. You really included beautiful life morals, and it was really nice to read. This should be read by others because of the characters' unique views on the world, their way of life, and the relatable bullying situations. The only things I think should be changed was that either they should be in university, or it should be made clearer that they're in university, because the dialogue sounded adult-ish. Also, you need to check some grammar and make the first chapters less confusing. For that, I'd suggest grounding the reader a bit more: including memories of the past, the setting etc. I think you also need to make sure we always know that Maydee likes music, maths and literature from the start, because it seemed as if those elements were being made up on the way. Apart from that, I loved the kind of person Maydee was, with several interests and especially the different ways she and Allen dealt with sickness. The love story was also beautiful. Also, "persons" should be "people." Finally, there were also some tense mistakes. Apart from that, like I said, this was definitely a worthy read, which makes me think about the way Maydee perceived the world."
