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Appreciation and Comission Request

"I’m Mia, a professional comic artist passionate about capturing the essence of your story through vivid illustrations. Let’s create something unforgettable! Discord: mia2436922 Instagram: bell_a25885 "

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Good

"Good story. I liked it. But on reading it, unlike your description, it looked more like batman having superman's power rather than superman living in Gotham as Bruce Wayne. "

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Oxiss

"This is just as good as the original story of both Batman and Superman! I would like to see more of your stories!!!"

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Kudos for writing such a masterpiece

"Kudos for writing such a masterpiece. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at fatlossplrryo AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks. Only 40 spots are left."

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Kal-El; The Dark Knight

"Not only original, creative and fun to read – but this fanfic actually makes sense as an alternative reality. Keeping in mind both Batman’s origins and Superman’s character, the two intertwine and become one person. The author has succeeded in creating a believable scenario, including the biggest characters from both worlds. To be quite blunt: I loved it and think it’s awesome"

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Very nice!

"It's a very interesting concept that you have going here. I'm curious to see where you take it. I only saw a few spelling/tense errors, so I will definitely be coming back to read the rest. Please do continue. You have a very good 'voice'."

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Black s on

"It was OK but you have more talent than this. Go for a book of your own,!!!"

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