Chapter 1
Los pájaros me echaron,
dicen que no puedo cantar mejor que ellos
¿o peor? , no les entiendo bien todavía.
A más de uno han picoteado por hacerse el acalorado;
yo les comparto migajas
y cada que puedo, un oído manso.
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Aca voy a subir un conjunto de mis poemas que escribí hace un tiempo.
Los pájaros me echaron,
dicen que no puedo cantar mejor que ellos
¿o peor? , no les entiendo bien todavía.
A más de uno han picoteado por hacerse el acalorado;
yo les comparto migajas
y cada que puedo, un oído manso.
Love this
Funny
Spicy
Suspenseful
Emotional
Profound
Heartwarming
Shocking
Good Writing
Compelling Plot
Great Character
Strong Dialog

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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sarah: Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?
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Hasta los parajos hacen bulling xD
Que lindo el poema, me pareció metafórico. por siertos aspectos de la vida, que pasa que a pesar de dedicarte al resto solo recibes desprecio. me gustó el poema. 😊👍