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Bloodlust: Born from her blood
"This story moved me. I wish it never ended. Thanks for sharing your story with us 💜💜💜"
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Lynne
"I absolutely loved this book I cried many a tear while reading .the story of Draven and Serelith is powerful and the words are so very true.fabulous."
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Bloodlust- born from her blood
"I absolutely loved your book! It was filled with suspense that kept me on the edge of my seat, and the characters were so well-developed. The intricate plot was not only interesting but also compelling. Each chapter left me eager to discover what would happen next, and I appreciated the thoughtful pacing that built tension throughout the story. Overall, it was a truly engaging read that I won’t soon forget🙂"
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40 chapters read
Insightful and emotional
"Unique story and not your usual read. Loved that it is something I've never come across before. Beautifully written and very poetic"
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Handsome Bad Boy meet Good Girl
"This story has a compelling premise: a monster uses a fairy's blood to reclaim his kingdom, but it backfires, destroying his inner darkness and awakening love and remorse. The plot's strength lies in this ironic twist—the blood's magic only works if the soul is willing, leading to his unexpected redemption rather than just power. The characters have strong potential: the ruthless monster's forced transformation promises deep development, while the naive fairy acts as a crucial catalyst. The themes of betrayal, hidden motives, and transformative sacrifice are well-defined. Suggestions: Show, don't tell the monster's ruthlessness early on to make his change more impactful. Deepen the fairy's perspective beyond just sensing darkness. Explore the monster's struggle with his new emotions after the transformation. Overall, it's a very promising concept with a unique take on redemption."
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