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Commitment Courage Honour Discipline

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Summary

Non Sexual: Journey of a young unfit girl who is forged into a fit women. A mid aged man Mr. Karl helps her and guide her way to it. Not only him but other mentors too. The methods might be traditional but they work perfectly fine.

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

In this story there is a man who is in his late 40's named Dr.Karl Williamson and a girl named Shanon who is 16 year old.

She was using an online site when she met him under the tag discipline.

She is a normal girl, lives normal life. Her parents are always busy as her father and mother both are film Directors.

About Dr.Karl (We call him Dr. because he has done his PhD and people which do PhD get the title as Doctors these people aren't doctors which treat Humans or animal these people have earned a doctorate degree but in this Story I will refer him as Mr.)


Mr.Karl is 47 yrs old he is a very very educated person.

He has a PhD Honours in Quantum Physics from the World's no.1 College of Physics and was the topper of the college.

He has two kids one is 22 and the other is 24 yrs old.

His younger son is Studying Economic.

And the older daughter is doing her PHD.

He had a wife who died a couple years ago due to Cardiac Arrest.

He earned loads and loads of money till the age of 42, and had a different profession too and then he decided to take an early retirement.

He has written more then 14 books which are World wide hit, he is a member of many big big companies.

As now he took an early retirement he wanted to teach kids at a local College that to all basics so that he could make the base stronger of the kids which he is teaching because he feels that "If you know your basics well Studying anything is like a walk in the park".

He was an amazing family guy, he took his children to parks then for amazing vacations and went on dinner after with her wife which he loved extremely.

There is a lot more about Mr.Karl which you will know when you start reading the further Chapters and is quite interesting as there's a lot to unravel.

He is more than just a teacher of a professor but more.


About Shanon:

Shanon is 16 year old girl.

Her parents are Movie Directors in fact her father is one of the Worlds top 12 Directors.

(But is he?)

She is a spoiled kid but she doesn't like the way she is, she wants to behave like a good kid but then her laziness always drags her down.

She needs to join gym because according to her height her weight is 7kgs excess, she really wants to join Navy but she knows deep down that it won't be possible until and unless she is great at Physics and Math.

As you already know her parents are artists so they are not into these things much as they are always busy with one or the other thing.…

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