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Respectful

"Yes, this story was about BDSM but it was more about the emotional side, the respectful side. Your writing showed the side most people don't understand or know about. Thank you."

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New freedom of Velvet

"AMAZING! 50 Shades has competition! Fabulous storyline! Good read for 21yo. "

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Absolutely Loved It

"A compelling erotic romance. Rafe, a dominant thanked his lucky stars the day Celia, a new submissive walked into the Velvet Cage. Little did he know just how much she would alter his very controlled life forever. A very creatively well written storyline. Highly recommend. "

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His Velvet Cage

"Lived it! 🖤🖤🖤"

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Best Erotica I've Ever Read

"This is the most realistic, genuinely written piece of erotica I've ever read. Absolutely love the depth and unanticipated change of feeling. The characters are so real. Looking forward to reading everything you've written & everything you'll write in the future. Your writing style is outstanding!"

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Hs velvet cage

"Truly enjoyed your story….good strong characters. Keep at it.💖"

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Good read

"The story kept me interested and great expressions of the characters thoughts and emotions "

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His Velvet Cage

"I really enjoyed the characters and the scenes. I love the the love and trust 2 people can share."

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Who knew

"So getting spanked, gagged, bound, hung up…is “fun” and cathartic . Don’t think it’s for me, but was raised to try everything at least once,… She is a brave student and he is a great dungeon master….Love the way this story developed, but wished that there was a bit more about the Logan part, maybe more history between each of them and him . Otherwise I absolutely loved this story, well written, relationship well developed, no mistakes, interesting, captivating,.. To the author- keep writing !!?"

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His velvet cage

"Super intense.loved all of it❤️"

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His Velvet Cage

"To be so short, it was packed full!!! I loved every word❤️"

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His velvet cage

"I loved everything about this story. Want to read more like it."

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Interesting

"As always, I enjoyed the opportunity to delve into this exotic, dark unknown world. Thank you for taking me on this journey."

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Very interesting.

"I am gaining a lot of insight of this type of lifestyle. Well written, enjoying the characters. Thank you. "

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Didn’t set it down.

"It was a fun quick read that I got to spend my lunch break with. Would love to hear more from these characters."

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