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🔥🔥🔥🔥

"It's got some bite to it! 😋 "

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Thrilling

"Thank you for taking me into this world. You made it seem so (normal). I enjoyed it to the last page."

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So arousing

"You have a talent to write the way, that I have the feeling that the person is whispering the words next to my ears. I was done already in the 1st chapter. The remaining story excellent alike with a lot of goosebumps 🥰 only criticism, that the storyline with Vivienne and the mysterious someone and Celeste death was not finished. But I guess the story was not about that 😉🤩 all in all, AMAZING. ❤️"

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Just WOW

" It what I expected to be sure! I actually liked the story where someone can give of themselves without reservation. This has some hard truths and some hard play though in context it can be understood. Thanks for writing this story."

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Fabulous

"I liked the slow burn of it "

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Beautiful and intriguing

"Very beautiful twist on a Dom and submissive story, thank you"

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Master of her moans

"Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It was hard to put down at times, though I would have liked to know what happened to Vivienne."

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Master of her Moans

"I really liked that you choose to have them going through this story as a Dom and Sub. But ending as true lover's. And the fact that their past's didn't break them, but made them stronger because of it makes for a better storyline. Thank you for the book. I actually got turned on a few times during my reading, but I guess that was what you were going for when writing it. So thanks!"

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Controlled,observant and undeniably LOVED

"Wow. Next level of wow. I am in awe of the author's captivating writing. "

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I don’t know

"I like this, I didn’t think I would but I liked the story line. Not dirty, loving!"

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The romance.The suspence of what is going to happen next is interesting. I

"I liked the suspense left in each chapter, which led the reader to find out what was going to happen next."

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Emotional, Raw, Powerful

"This isn't just another book on BDSM. That's just a tool used to strip down the chaos in the world of two, exposing strength and truth that leads to something unexpected and never hoped for between them... love in its purest form."

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Growth thru tenderness and pain

"Beautifully written, all emphasis on the lead characters and no unnecessary additions of characters or convoluted subplots. Letting us peek into the world of BDSM and letting us see what drives some to this kind of fetish . I lived the story - not my usual genre , but definitely worth reading ! To the author- Bravo, kept my interest, no unnecessary and long winded descriptions ,… Please continue writing, I’d love to read more of your work !"

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Master of Her Moans

"I was not expecting this story to be so beautiful! The way the tension was set up, and the way the characters changed without it feeling forced was such a pleasant surprise! I’ve read a number of stories on here in a short amount of time, but this is the first time I felt I had to leave a comment to let someone else know this is definitely worth reading🥰"

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Master of her moans

"Oh my!!! That was absolutely amazing! Stressful and intense on a different level! I was holding my breath through most of it and although I tried to hit the like at the end of each chapter, I had no words...well done❤️❤️❤️"

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