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Compelling plot

"Emric is interestingly terrifying Loving it so far."

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Masquerade of desire

"Well written "

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Opinion

"We need the second part😭😭 Nothing to say it’s was so niceeee❤️"

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Ahhh screaming internally!!

"Basically pulled an all nighter to read this in one go and I tend to have a bad long-term attention span, so go read it!"

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Love it!

"Cant wait for the next book! "

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Love it

"I’m not normally a vampire story reader, but I’m sure glad I read it. You had me hooked in the first chapter. Looking forward to reading the next one."

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High Fantasy!

"Picked it up because it has the Inkitt winner tag. Stayed here because of the unique storyline. The pacing is the charm. Author has taken her time to carve out each character with depth. The mystery keeps you going with anticipation of what's upcoming next. Still waiting for Part 2 of the Series as I think its too early to judge any character and their idiosyncracies. "

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Love it

"I dislike when emeric touched aris before knowing she was a girl but the whole novel was insanely good "

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, really interesting

"I loved it! Really interesting story... Hope you update soon book 2!!!! Can't wait!!! "

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Love and kisses♡

"I think its really good and has a well written plot."

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Great Story

"I really like your story. Strong intrigues and very good writing. I love it!"

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Masquerade of desire

"My first vampire book here and I ❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰 The story was different from the obvious vampire lore witch was great Loved the part of the prophecy and hoping it will be explored more in book 2.... Very few grammatical errors so that was a plus. Hoping for more from this author loved their writing style "

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Great story

"I like the story line. The intrigue, suspense . Everything well written"

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Interesting

"A lot is going on in this story. Dies he love her or not? Why is he so cruel to her?"

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Nice story!

"Nice story! I love it so far."

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Compelled into reading

"So sorry to see them back to square one, but looking forward to the second part."

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One of my most favourite story ♥️

"I just love the story soo much ...please update us with part 2 as only two chapters are available yet please i can't wait to see what happens in next Beautiful story and the tension between them uff 🤌♥️✨"

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Relighting my fire for vampires

"I am enjoying this original storyline. There may be some technical errors, but nothing so devastating as to take away from the story’s essence. "

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Amazing

"I really like the writing style and how it feels like the scnes in the novel are happening infront of you, the vivid descriptions are amazing and the tension and affection of emric towards aris is chef's kiss"

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10/10

"Recommending this to my best friend it was slightly spicy and surprisingly wholesome. Good plot. Leaves room for growth in the upcoming book"

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