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Maldito sheriff

"La historia está bien, la descripción del ambiente está bien echo, puedes ver a través del personaje, el único personaje que no ha gustado es el sheriff, es manipulador y la tiene acorralada siempre, Nathan me ha sorprendido, no le veía teniendo sangre fría. Recomendaría la historia a familiares. Buen trabajo seguiré leyendo tus libros."

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what a sinister story

"A real mysterious and dark story. The characters are fitting with a dominant, manipulative sherif and a sweet lady in distress with a tragic family history. Since it is not a romance, don't expect HEA... but a resolution fitting the story... using the words of the author: something in between monster and hero. A genuinely chilling but really great read. 👏🏻🖤"

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Knox Hallow

"The author managed to weave instant tension and mystery from the get go. It was a balancing act that kept me guessing and made everyone look like they could be a villain which is on par with the great writers of mystery like Agatha and Doyle. I was jumping at every creak. If you like tension in every paragraph, both sinister and sexual, its written for you, but if you want vapid romance, look someplace else. I loved this story, but it has an 80's European artsy ending of a more a philosophical wrap up of leaving well enough alone and not fighting one's bonds than I was expecting. But I also understood how well the trap was set, so it was a good dose of realism in how humans don't always win just because something isn't fair."

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Suspenseful Story That Hooks You

"I thought this was a very well-written story with a great plot. The ending was a little abrupt, but not in a negative way."

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Intense

"This is such an intense read with so much twists and turns. The darkness of the male MC stood out not just through physical actions but also psychologycally."

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Suspenseful!!

"This kept me hooked throughout the story! I wish some open ended things were wrapped up at the end, but I still enjoyed it nonetheless! "

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knox hollow

"good novel but in twisted kind but left me questions not answered, for a moment I thought this is a fantasy novel then became psychological, a thriller sure"

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