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The Hybrid Luna
"Well written book really enjoyed 🙏"
Anticipation
"Totally engrossed! I hope there is another book and maybe even a series! Wonderful writing and story building. "
The Hybrid Luna
"Very good story. Full of suspense,mystery and love. I love that it is a different kind of story from the normal werewolf stories. Kept me reading to the end. Very well written. "
L'hybride de la lune
"Très bon scénario Je l'ai lu d'une traite "
Feed back on THE HYBRID LUNA
"The "Boredom" Meter & Pacing The Hook: The transition from the "clean bill of physical health" to the "smell" in the hospital room is great. It tells the reader exactly what kind of story this is without a manual. The Drag: The paragraph about the wife and daughter (Marie and Sophia) felt like "filler" information. They don't appear in the scene, so mentioning them by name slows down the momentum of getting to Shelly’s house. The Payoff: The ending is sharp. The silence being broken by Shelly's bluntness provides a satisfying "clink" at the end of the chapter. Character Reality Check The Narrator: He feels like a weary pro. The detail about his southern accent thickening when he's stressed is a top-tier human touch. It makes him feel like a real person with a history, not just a plot delivery vehicle. Jane: You’ve nailed the "vibration" of a traumatized kid. The "shutting the door gently" to avoid attention is a very observant detail. It shows her trauma rather than telling us "she was scared." Shelly: She’s the standout here. She isn't "nice," and in a story full of people walking on eggshells around Jane, her being stern and "short" is exactly why she feels believable. She isn't treating Jane like a victim; she's treating her like a person (or a wolf). Dialogue & Voice The Good: "Fair to middlin'." It’s classic, it’s character-rich, and it establishes Shelly’s "old soul" vibe immediately. The Stiff: The internal monologue about the strip club bartender. "He immediately called the police (as he should)." The parenthetical "as he should" feels like the author's voice peaking through to reassure the reader, rather than the character's natural thoughts. The Fix: Just let the facts speak. "A bartender found her in a dumpster and called the cops." We know he should have; you don't need to tell us. The "So What?" (Tension & Stakes) The stakes here are psychological. The "dread" the narrator feels in the hospital room sets the bar high. However, the "Alpha" phone call felt a little too easy. If this is a "special case" and a "long drive," I wanted to feel a bit more resistance or weight behind the decision to bring a "broken" wolf into the pack. Logic & Consistency Issues The Smell: If the narrator could smell her "as soon as he stepped into the room," why wouldn't the doctors or other staff notice she smelled... different? Even if they aren't wolves, a girl who has been in a dumpster and has "wolf" pheromones would likely trigger some kind of reaction from humans (disgust, unease, or just "she needs three more showers"). The Judge: Getting a judge to approve an "overnight stay with a social worker's family" for a high-profile Jane Doe found in a dumpster in just "a few hours" is a massive stretch of reality. The Fix: Maybe the narrator "bent the rules" or "forgot" to mention she was going to his house. It would make him feel more like a desperate advocate for the girl. "
Luna
"Interesting mystery. The main character is intriguing "
The Hybrid Luna
"Compelling plot and funny. Suspenseful."
The hybrid luna
"Great story. I didn't like where she rejected Beau because she wasn't making it easy for him too; they were both at fault. But it all worked out fine in the end. Worth the read"
Loved
"Great story and plot! Great characters. "
Great read!!
"This is one of the good ones. Ivy is a good strong female lead her relationships with the people in her life are believable and human. I especially like her interactions with her brother. The plot was strong and the continuity of the story was on point"
Great story
"Love it wonderful story! "
Suspensefuand worth it!
"Thank you for writing this narrative and sharing it with us readers. I love your character development. The suspense you create and bringing us to the edge of our seat time and time again was amazing."
Trying to steal what isn’t theirs
"What a crazy emotional journey. So much wrapped in this story, I found myself rereading chapters just so I didn’t miss something. Prejudice is a hard thing to get past and betrayal and pain are the fuel that leads to heartache. I’m glad for the ending, it leaves us readers hoping that their relationship moves forward with love and understanding "
Awesome
"This has been a great read. Different from others that I've read. Am enjoying it immensely. "
Soo good!!
"I love this book I’m only a little more then half way through and I was already thinking about looking up to see if you have any more books out. Great job, keep writing!!"
Great read so far!!
"I have enjoyed the twist to the story so far! It gross me wanting to read more! I hope this story is finished soon! "
The hybrid luna
"Can't wait to see where the story goes. Sucked me right in. Eagerly waiting for the next update."
Disappointing ending
"Really disappointed in the ending. I enjoyed the book otherwise "
Amazing read
"I really enjoyed this book. It has a great story and keeps you in suspense. I feel the ending was a bit rushed and ended sooner when a lot more could have been added. I would have loved to read more and for the story to go into more depth in the last quarter of the book. "
Great plot
"I’m enjoying this story and can’t wait to get into more. The continual swapping of POVs is a bit annoying but I’m getting kinda used to it. Doesn’t forest only have one “r”?"
