Entity by Nick Adams at Inkitt
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ENTITY

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Summary

Television star Dan McCallister's Mercedes crashes through a guardrail on a rain-soaked country road, He walks away with minor injuries while his passenger—a young production assistant burns alive in the wreckage. The official investigation rules it a tragic accident, but Dan knows the truth about what really happened in those final, terrible moments. He believes his secret is safe. He's wrong. Something has been watching from the shadows of that burning car, and it's not finished with Dan McCallister. It begins subtly—strangers who know impossible details about the crash, familiar faces that twist into something inhuman when no one else is looking, the persistent buzz of flies that appear wherever guilt festers. Reality starts to fracture as Dan's carefully constructed life crumbles piece by piece. Each supernatural encounter forces Dan toward impossible choices that compound his damnation. Each attempt to escape only tightens the noose around his neck. The entity stalking him seems to know exactly which psychological buttons to push, which moral compromises will break him completely. As Dan's world collapses into a nightmare of supernatural horror and very real consequences, he begins to understand that some sins carry a price that extends far beyond earthly punishment. The dead don't always stay buried, especially when they died screaming your name.

Genre
Horror
Author
Nick Adams
Status
Complete
Chapters
18
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

The night cloaked the winding country back road in absolute darkness. Ancient oak trees formed a canopy overhead, their gnarled branches reaching across the narrow asphalt like skeletal fingers trying to trap whatever passed beneath. The only illumination came from the headlights of Dan McCallister’s sleek black sedan as it carved through the oppressive gloom.

The car’s interior was thick with tension that had been building for miles. Rain had begun to fall, each drop striking the windshield with a sound like small bullets, promising a deluge that would make the treacherous road even more dangerous.

Anna Mitchell’s finger stabbed at the radio button with violent precision, silencing Elvis Presley mid-chorus of “You’re the Devil in Disguise.” The sudden silence was deafening, broken only by the steady hum of the engine and the whisper of tires on wet asphalt.

A solitary bluebottle fly crawled across the radio knob with deliberate slowness before taking flight. Its wings caught the green glow of the dashboard lights as it circled in the confined space. The insect’s presence was impossible—no windows were open, no doors had been left ajar, and the car’s climate control was sealed against the outside air. Yet there it was, moving with purpose before settling on the dashboard directly between them.

“I can’t believe this,” Anna whispered, her voice cracking. “You’re breaking up with me?”

At twenty-six, Anna Mitchell possessed the kind of effortless beauty that could interrupt conversations in crowded rooms. Her wide, expressive eyes—normally the color of warm honey—had the capacity to convey depths of emotion that made grown men stumble over their words. Her features were delicate, and when she smiled, which had been often in the early days of their relationship, it was with a radiance that seemed to illuminate everything around her.

Tonight, however, her face was a portrait of anguish. The careful makeup she had applied hours earlier was now destroyed by tears. Black mascara traced dark rivers down her flushed cheeks, creating abstract patterns of grief that caught the dashboard’s glow. Her usually perfect hair hung in disheveled strands around her face, and her hands trembled as she clutched a crumpled tissue.

She wore a simple blue dress that Dan had once said brought out her eyes, chosen tonight with the desperate hope that familiar intimacy might soften whatever blow was coming. The small gold necklace at her throat—a gift from Dan on their six-month anniversary—seemed to mock the promises it had once represented.

“Pull over,” Anna said, her voice barely above a whisper but carrying the weight of absolute finality.

Dan McCallister kept his eyes fixed resolutely on the winding road ahead. The shadows from passing trees danced across his handsome face—the same face that graced magazine covers and television screens across the country. The carefully maintained features that had made him a household name and earned him a devoted fanbase who saw him as the epitome of masculine virtue.

At forty-two, Dan had finally carved out a respectable career playing Dr. Travis Dawson in “Hellfire Drive,” a popular crime drama that had run for six successful seasons. The role had been his salvation, finally allowing him to escape the soap opera typecasting that had defined—and nearly destroyed—his early acting years. No longer was he “Tommy Worthington” from “Summer Days,” the pretty-boy character who had paid his bills but left him feeling hollow and artistically frustrated.

Dr. Travis Dawson was different—complex, morally ambiguous, the kind of character that earned Emmy nominations and critical respect. The role had given Dan gravitas, transformed him from a daytime television heartthrob into a serious actor who could command seven figures per episode.

The sedan continued its steady progress down the dark road. In the distance, storm clouds were gathering like an army preparing for battle, promising the kind of weather that turned country roads into death traps.

“We were never together, Anna,” Dan replied, his tone measured and detached.

The fly on the dashboard seemed to orient itself toward their voices, its compound eyes reflecting the instrument panel’s lights. It remained perfectly still, as if listening to every word with an intelligence no insect should possess.

Outside, the rain was falling harder now, each drop exploding against the windshield with increasing force. The wipers struggled to keep pace, their rhythmic motion creating a hypnotic soundtrack to the destruction.

The irony wasn’t lost on him. It had started innocently enough—Anna was a production assistant who’d somehow landed a coveted spot on his show’s crew. She’d been different from the usual starry-eyed fans who threw themselves at him at conventions and premieres. Anna was subtle, professional even, but he’d caught her stealing glances during takes. She knew everything about his career—every role, every interview, every rumor. At first, her encyclopedic knowledge of his work had been flattering. Now it felt suffocating.

Their first encounter had been during a late-night re-shoot. Most of the crew had gone home, but Anna had stayed, claiming she needed to organize the next day’s call sheets. When Dan emerged from his trailer, exhausted and frustrated with the director’s endless demands for retakes, she’d been there with a perfectly timed cup of coffee and a sympathetic ear. One thing led to another, and before he knew it, they were tangled together in his trailer.

“You promised!” Anna’s voice rose sharply, cutting through his memories like a knife. “For six months, Dan. Six months of your lies!”

Six months of secret meetings in her cramped apartment, where the walls were covered with posters from his shows and magazine clippings featuring his face. Six months of her photographing him when she thought he wasn’t looking, collecting pieces of their encounters like sacred relics. Of increasingly desperate texts that started as playful flirtation and evolved into something that made his skin crawl with their intensity.

Dan flinched slightly but maintained his composure. “Look, I’m sorry, it’s just—”

“It’s just what, Danny?” she demanded, spitting out his name like it tasted bitter on her tongue.

A muscle in Dan’s jaw twitched. “Don’t call me Danny. You know it bugs me.”

She’d started calling him that after their third encounter, claiming it made him seem more real, more hers. The name reminded him of childhood, of vulnerability—everything he’d worked to leave behind when he’d reinvented himself as Dante McCallister, leading man.

“Oh, I’m sorry,” Anna said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. “I forgot that Danny died when you got that first commercial. When you decided that your real name wasn’t good enough for the credits.”

The rain drummed harder against the windshield. Dan’s hands tightened on the steering wheel until his knuckles went white. He could see Anna’s reflection in the passenger window—mascara streaked down her cheeks, her auburn hair disheveled from running her fingers through it when she was angry.

“I never promised you anything beyond—”

“Beyond what? Beyond making me feel like maybe I meant something?” Anna collapsed back into her seat, turning away from him to stare out the passenger window. Her teardrop earrings—a gift from him after their first “date,” when guilt had made him generous—caught what little light there was.

Silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating.

“I don’t know what to say,” Dan finally offered, his voice weary. The strain of maintaining his double life had begun to show in the dark circles under his eyes and the constant knot in his stomach. The late-night phone calls, the elaborate lies to Beth about working late, the paranoia that someone would spot them together—it had all taken its toll.

Anna’s laugh was harsh and brittle. “Ha! You’re such a fucking coward. You had plenty to say when you were sneaking out of your house to meet me. When you were sending me those texts at three in the morning.”

Those texts. What had he been thinking? Anna had a way of catching him in vulnerable moments—after fights with Beth, during periods of career uncertainty, when the pressure of being “Dante McCallister” became too much to bear. In those moments, her worship felt like absolution. She made him feel like the hero he played on screen.

Dan’s shoulders tensed. “Look. I didn’t mean it to go this far. I think we just made a mistake—”

“A mistake?” Anna interrupted. “Oh really? So was it a mistake when you were fucking me before you came, or just after?”

Dan felt his face flush crimson. Anna had never spoken to him like this—so crude, so deliberately harsh. Even in their most passionate moments, she’d maintained a certain tenderness that had drawn him to her in the first place. But now, sitting in the dim light of his car, she looked like a stranger.

Her jagged laugh filled the car. “It’s funny. You play this big man on TV, but in reality, you’re just a little boy. Just taking whatever you want and leaving everyone else to deal with the mess while you go home to your perfect family—”

The sharp crack of Dan’s palm against the steering wheel reverberated through the car like a gunshot. Anna jumped, her tirade cut short. His face was a mask of barely contained rage.

“What the fuck do you want me to do, Anna? Huh?” he shouted. “You think I’m just going to leave my wife and daughter to do what? Play happy families with you? Jeopardize my career to be with some obsessed fan? Don’t be so fucking naive.”

The words ‘obsessed fan’ hung in the air like a slap. Because that’s what she was, wasn’t it? Not a production assistant who happened to admire his work, but a fan who’d orchestrated her way onto his set. She remembered the months of research—memorizing his coffee order from paparazzi photos, learning which gym he frequented, which restaurants he favored. She’d crafted herself into exactly what she thought he’d want.

A tense silence followed, broken only by the sound of tires on asphalt and their heavy breathing.

“Your career?” she sneered. “Let’s face it, Dan. You’re not Leonardo DiCaprio!”

“You’re such a fucking hypocrite,” Dan muttered, his voice dangerously low.

“Oh yeah?” Anna challenged, leaning toward him.

“Yes!” Dan’s hand tightened on the wheel, the wedding ring Beth had placed on his finger eight years ago glinting in the dashboard’s glow.

“Okay. How am I a hypocrite?” she demanded, her eyes flashing with defiance.

“You play the innocent, hard-done-by victim,” Dan’s voice gained momentum. “But let’s not forget you got exactly what you wanted from all this too. You wanted me the moment you walked into that set, I could see it in your eyes. The way you stared. The way you positioned yourself so I’d notice you.”

It was true, and they both knew it.

“Oh, fuck you—” Anna started, but Dan continued.

“You knew I had a family and still you used every trick in the book to get me into your bed. The accidental touches, the late-night texts about ‘work emergencies,’ showing up at my hotel in that dress—” His voice dropped, contemptuous. “So don’t act like I’m the bad guy just because things didn’t work out exactly the way you wanted, Anna. Grow the fuck up!”

Anna stared out the window, her reflection ghostly against the dark glass. The moon had disappeared behind a bank of clouds, plunging the landscape into deeper darkness. The highway stretched ahead like a black ribbon. When she finally spoke, her voice was eerily calm.

“You think I’m just gonna go away quietly, Dan? Just fade into the background, like some embarrassing ‘mistake’?” She turned to face him, her eyes glittering with malice. “Well you don’t get to choose this time, Dan.”

With deliberate slowness, she reached into her handbag and pulled out her phone—the same phone that contained hundreds of intimate messages from Dan, dozens of compromising photos he hadn’t known she’d taken, recordings of their private conversations. Voice memos of him talking about his marriage, his fears, his insecurities.

“In fact, I think it’s time we call Beth, don’t you think?” she suggested, her voice deceptively sweet. “Come clean? I mean, she has a right to know what her husband has been doing for the past six months.”

Dan’s eyes flickered between the road and the phone in Anna’s hand. “Who’s being the fucking child now?”

“Mmm…” Anna hummed, her finger hovering over the screen. “Maybe we should sit little Marla down and tell her as well, seeing as it affects her too—”

Her words ended in a sharp cry of pain as Dan suddenly lunged across the center console, his fingers clamping around her wrist with bruising force. The speedometer needle jumped as his foot pressed harder on the accelerator. The car began to swerve.

“You go anywhere near my daughter and I swear to God, I will fucking kill you,” Dan hissed, his face inches from hers. She could feel his breath hot against her cheek, smell the whiskey he’d had at dinner with his agent earlier. “Do you understand me?”

Anna struggled against his grip, tears of pain welling in her eyes. The phone clattered to the floor of the car as she tried to wrench free. The car continued to veer dangerously.

“UNDERSTAND?” Dan roared.

“Fuck you!” Anna screamed back, her free hand clawing at his face, her nails leaving red trails across his skin. She drew blood, and the metallic scent filled the air between them.

The car lurched violently as Dan let go of her to seize the wheel with both hands, fighting to regain control. But Anna, driven by a year’s worth of betrayal and obsession, lunged at him like a wild animal. Her fists pounded against his chest and shoulders, her screams filling the car.

“Get off me!” Dan shrieked as the car began to spin, the tires losing traction on the slick asphalt.

“Aghhh!! Fuck!” Anna yelled, still wrestling with Dan as the car careened toward the edge of the road. Through the windshield, they could see the safety barrier rushing toward them.

There was a moment of suspended terror as the vehicle smashed through the safety barrier. Then weightlessness as the car became airborne, tumbling through the darkness like a grotesque carnival ride. The world outside the windows became a disorienting blur of stars and earth and shadow.

Inside the car, loose objects became projectiles—Anna’s phone, Dan’s sunglasses from the center console, coffee cups and breath mints, all flying through the air in slow motion. The shattering of glass and the groaning of metal filled their ears as the car flipped multiple times.

When the car finally came to rest on its roof, the wheels still spinning helplessly in the air, a deafening silence fell over the scene. In the distance, a semi-truck’s horn blared as the driver realized what had happened. The soft patter of rain beginning to fall on the mangled wreckage was the only sound.

Steam rose from the crumpled engine, and somewhere in the darkness, glass continued to tinkle as it settled. The acrid smell of gasoline and hot metal began to fill the night air.

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Tense and compelling take on the romantic triangle. Strong dialogue. Efficient description that set time and place and helped move the story. My only suggestion, and it's just as a reader, would be a little more foreshadowing on the demonic/evil side of the story.

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