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great read

"kept me interested "

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The House

"This was a very exciting, and interesting story. I loved it. Very scary and horrorfing."

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The House

" I really enjoyed this book. The story was just scary enough and I loved the plot. Great details made the story even more scary and kept me turning the pages until I finished this book. Great Book !"

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Great stoey

"Overall that was a great book. I am definitely going to recommend it to some of my friends! Keep up the good work. "

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Well written

"Nice plot, great for psychological thriller lovers"

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Amazing and innovative

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The House

"Fantastic story loved how Jessica keeps telling Kevin to take his medicines and Kevin talking like a maniac ! Wish Ricky did something major role in the story but his character is awesome too and the authors writing skills in LOVE WITH THEM!! "

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Good writing

"Great spook factor, maybe not quite enough left to the imagination to be truly spooky, but a good read nonetheless. A bit more showing vs telling will help expand this into an incredible story. Enjoyed reading it! Great job!"

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The house

"The author knows how to write, do to keep the reader interested."

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Head Case

"I don't usually read ghost stories but I have seen many movies of this genre. Not original, but well done, nonetheless. The author is good at presenting atmosphere. It is a short story or novella at best. Mental health is a theme in this story. As the story is short, there is room for development without making it that much longer. The reader was never told if the room at the end of the hall had any older issues, like a painting concealed under a painting. Perhaps you could come up with a Master twist at the end involving an incident long past & forgotten. Something so abhorrent and evil, the house itself is cursed along with any unfortunate souls to grace its unnatural presence. Why the fifties tune? Did the Grandfather really say the room was evil, If so, why? Is there a history known only to the dead? The room at the end of the hall whispers the answer in discordant voices."

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