Inkitt
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Charming Story

"Old dogs really are the best. The calm, mellow energy that they have most of the time is fantastic. The only downside is that you lose them far too soon. They're just as active as the younger ones when they want to be, without all the chewing and training a puppy needs. So glad to see someone take this up in a story. It's a lovely story, but there are a couple of spots where you've misused a word. Easy enough to fix with something like Grammarly. "

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lovely

"i loved how throughout the story that the words engaged in how they aged and there wasn’t really anything to dislike i felt as if the ratings i gave were appropriate for a starting writer with very good potential and as someone who might be interested in a good dog and family bond story i’d recommend this to them overall very good!"

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