La Luna Que Nació En El Subsuelo by Eva at Inkitt
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La luna que nació en el subsuelo

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Summary

Un poema intentando expresar el deseo que el brillo de una relación no se apague... otras interpretaciones también se puede dar...

Genre
Poetry
Author
Eva
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

La luna que nació en el subsuelo



En el subsuelo nada se ve

La luz se fue hace rato y no sé si va a volver

Estoy esperando que amanezca, que florezca

Así puedo perder la ceguedad y subir


No dejes que la luna se vuelva oscura

Déjala blanca y pura

La noche no debe apagar apagarla

Ella sabe que brilla más que nada


No fue un momento exacto

Las raíces sola se mostraron

Ellas querían florecer desde abajo

Querían tener las ramas de su árbol





Saben que el tiempo no frenará

Por eso, ellas más quieren disfrutar

Quieren abrazar tu alma con las ramas

Quieren sentirte cerca cuando las hojas se van

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