What is your opinion?
Très bien
"L’histoire se lit bien, il y a quelque des inversions de prénom par exemple Eliot à la place d’Edward mais pas gênant Merci pour l’histoire "
Kissed in the Dark
"I love this. This is so amazing. The only thing I dont like is how it ended, but other than that, I love it!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️"
Kisses in the dark
"I like your writing technique and how sometimes you keep your readers in suspense. I would definitely recommend this book to my sister who loves bl stories "
Nice work .
" It is very underrated . I refuse to believe it is not blowing up !! Either way , I love it and just AWSOME writing and twists . Keep up the good work !! "
What?
"Well, reading this story I was quite intrigued initially and whilst I agree with Lou’s point about trust - the plot doesn’t satisfy the question of how his pregnancy as a human male will affect his future life if he leaves Edward. Also what about Edward’s getting weak and feral because of being without a mate. Even if there is no happy ending at least I would have loved to see those issues addressed. "
Idk....
"Kyle is freaking annoying.... The ending was worse. Great book but my goodness Kyle’s character is overbearing "
Could use editing/rewrite/development
"By the 2nd - 3rd chapter, issues regarding the plot flow/mistakes are present. This is labeled as a "omegaverse" story, and as I read through, I can't say there was much development/presence of it. Male mc is at one point referred to as omega and then as I got to the end, he was like a normal human transitioning to one. There was many ideas thrown in, like the wolf packs, alphas and mates, normal humans/omega humans?? But none were fully fleshed out. Most things were roughly stated a a matter of fact, and then a time skip would occur. So I can't say any of these "relationships (mates)" felt genuine, from the lack of any deep communication/bonding onscreen. "
