It has potential...

"There's only one chapter out currently, but I think the premise is both interesting and promising. The writing, however, isn't good. The prose is full of metaphors and similes, most of which don't make sense under scrutiny, and the flow of the sentences is choppy. It reads like the author just wanted to write purple prose and nothing else, or the author used AI. Either way, the story has potential and I'd like to see where it goes."