What is your opinion?
Great story
"Love this story and the subtle changes form the original lively "
Bruised no more
"I like the plot, the characters. I like how you made Isabella charter from weak to strong. Love Luca characters. Ant wait to see how you finished this story. 😀😃😄"
Great story
"This story is really good so far. I can’t wait for more."
Loving the plot
"This has been a great story so far; very intriguing and the storyline is interesting.. This story broached a tough subject of DV and other triggers. However, the author is very sensitive in addressing it. The story keeps you hooked and wanting to see what happens next. Really good storybso far, can't wait to see what else this story has in store😊"
Bruised No More
"Excellent story, intriguing and keeps you turning the pages. Well written. Can't wait to see what happens next. Recommend an open mind to read this story as not for the light hearted. Looking forward to the next chapters."
Plot is ok, but AI generated
"If you had written this yourself instead of using AI this could have been a good book with a good plot. The AI is obvious since it always does this annoying listing of feelings and/or proclamations of love. Instead there are numerous gaps and repeats. What did the husband do to her? He picks something up shes afraid of then all of a sudden shes in a hospital. What did she tell everyone when she told them all and how did they react? Who was the old rival at the engagement party she did something to that made her feel empowered and what was it she did? How many times can the word defiant be used in the same chapter when Luca is on his way to save her? You also had two very different renditions of the interaction and conversation between Diego and Bella after he took her. The characters repeat the,selves to each other lot too which is an AI thing. "
