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Loving it

"This is the second novel in the trilogy ams l have not been disappointed. I'll finish it today (that'll be both read in 4 days) before l start number three l will catch up with housework which has been neglected. Book is THAT good"

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Amazing 2nd book

"I loved this 2nd book, actually better than the first. I feel like the characters really grew and the plot evolved nicely. Waiting for the 3rd book!"

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Stress

"You had me smiling, laughing, and thinking Lina was an idiot in love. Henri is a real thug. Karl, not Karl. Lily, Now what? Book 3 here I come! Don't ever stop writing. I am happy you suggested that I read your books. I have done almost nothing in my house but stayed glued to reading."

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Really enjoyable from start to finish

"Fantastic book Great use of characters Good story - with a very good background knowledge It was great to see how books 1 & 2 followed on Very good read "

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Lisa

"Lina aggravates me so much!! Like I get it sort of but why does she have to be such a flight risk all of the time!! "

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Want new chapters. Whose baby is Lina carrying

"Please, give us the remaining chapters soon. "

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Berserford empire book 2

"This is too intense, but I need a happy ending fir them both. I'm sure she does love Daniel ❤️ please a happy ending "

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Amy

"I am hooked with this story.. Can't wait for the next update.."

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Great story 💋

"I am a sucker for a great story and you delivered in volume 1. I can’t wait for the story to unfold in volume 2. Let Lina come to her senses. "

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Lina & Daniel

"Grandparents have not yet arrived? "

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