What is your opinion?
Very creative
"Very creative. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordsdevs AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks. Only 50 spots are left. Mark"
Well done
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Vacation Identity
"Yes, intriguing and solidly written. I liked the build up in the early chapters which added question to question and left me wanting to find answers. This is a novel well worth persisting with. I think you need to get rid of some extraneous material, pare down the language to its bare bones. 'Suddenly' 'Now' unnecessary adverbs, passive tenses, modifiers, adverbial clauses which don't add much. It's not a huge job but it would make a big difference to the pace of the narrative. You need to be ruthless. It'll also help ease out some of the formality of the language which can be an obstacle. All in all, though, well worth a bit of work. Those three stars will quickly become 4's and 5's. I hope this is helpful. Good luck with your writing. In case it's of interest, this is the link to my own novel: .https://www.inkitt.com/stories/thriller/225508"
