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Feel good

"A classic feel good type story with a few twists to keep it interesting. Great development of characters leaving us wanting to know more about the Kitsune paving the way for a second book while leaving this as a stand alone if the reader prefers. I hate when writers break stories up into multiple books that are unnecessary. Some are so extensive they have to be broken up or the book would weigh a ton, but many are there just to draw the story out over a longer period. This is the best way of writing in my opinion in that it’s the readers choice if they want to continue in this world. I’ll likely look for Daniels story, but don’t feel forced to for the story to be complete. Keep writing like this, it’s wonderful. "

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Immediate YES!

"Easily hooked me in chapter 1. I couldn't put it down and read thru the whole book in less than 24 hours. As far as I'm concerned, there were no slow, uninteresting parts. The story moved along at a good pace and had lots of unexpected parts."

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Fantastic can’t wait to read more.

"Hi! I just want to say that the plot line is really great as was the writing. I can’t wait to read more works by this author! "

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21 days rejection

"I love the story and the characters. Your writing is on point. Awe s ome"

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Great Story

"Great story, really enjoyed reading it."

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Moon bound... wow

"Every chapter leaves you wanting the next. What a story of healing and self discovery. Beautifully written. Looking forward to reading more from this author. 😍 "

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Wonderful 🌈

"I ❤️ this book. The author has written a story for everyone with great characters that capture the audience’s interest and enables them to envision the actions and tone of each scene🤓. It’s an easy read that has few flaws that don’t detract from the overall storyline ! I’m waiting for the next chapter on pins and needles 🪡. 😇😇😇"

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21 days of rejection

"I liked the writing format of this book, how the author broke down the chapters to paragraphs instead of the chapters being read as just one overly written sentence. I refuse to read stories/books like that. "

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21 days of rejection

"Can't wait to read more of your books. I hope you included Grace in Daniel's story, it would be wonderful to see their friendship continuing "

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It was good

"It was good enjoyed it "

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21 days of rejection

"Great story which I really enjoyed reading. Well written too! Looking forward to reading more stories of yours. Thank you for sharing."

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21 days of rejection

"Wow, this was an amazing book. It was hard to put down. I can't wait to read about Daniel and Cameron stories. Thank you for a wonderful book "

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Beautifully written

"This story is beautiful. I love the characters. And the fact that it can truly relate to everyday life as far as relationships go "

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21 Days of rejection

"Good story"

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21 days of rejection

"A well written book that I absolutely loved!"

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Lea123

"Loved the story. It was really entertaining. Thanks for a great story"

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21 Days Of Rejection

"Wow absolutely loved this story 💕 I couldn’t stop reading it... thank you author 👏👏👏 it was different and very enjoyable the plot was brilliant...and true love shone ... look forward to reading more of your stories 😊"

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Kez

"It was a great story, and I look forward to more."

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21 days of rejection.

"My 1st pick since I opened the app again after 2 years. And it didn't disappoint this reader. I love everything about the book and makes this reader check more of the Author's works. "

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21 days of rejection

"I enjoyed reading this book. Was sweet and intense at the same time. The story was good, and for me, that english is not my first language. It was easy to follow the story and characters. "

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