What is your opinion?
Love this story
"I had to come back and give this story some love. It's hot and steamy and kinky in all the right ways. I understand the criticism for redundancy, but it doesn't overshadow the tension, friction, and chemistry of the story itself. Good work. This one had me checking twice daily for a new chapter every day!"
K...
"For some reason this story felt like it could be a k-drama (of course, in the K-drama it would be much more toned down). The character and story lacks context, but the individual scenes are well written and... well, all I can say is that I was compelled to keep clicking to the next chapter. Unusually for a story like this, it had a very satisfying ending. btw, for some reason the heading says I just read 3 chapters - I did read it all!"
Painfully Repetitive
"I have no idea how I have read all the way through chapter 15 but here I am. This is the most redundantly repetitive and frustrating thing have ever read. The 15 chapters I have read seriously could be two chapters. ‘You are a garbage and I’m going to punish you’ ‘yes please do it’ ‘I’m going to do it because you’re a filthy $lut’ ‘yes I am please do it’.... Again and again and again and again. The writing itself isn’t great either. I feel like the only reason why I have read so much is because I am just waiting for someone to do something; however, I am giving up on this story and to anyone who is thinking about reading this, please spare yourself the mind numbing experience and just don’t. Go do something more entertaining like having a root canal. "
